From 41cd2febd3d2a8d26d264a47e4253fda8076ea0b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Melanie Yarbrough <11952755+myarb@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 12 May 2022 12:23:01 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Apply suggestions from code review

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 ## Integrated with GitHub
 
-Issues let you track your work on {% data variables.product.company_short %}, where development happens. When an issue is mentioned from in another issue or pull request, the issue's timeline reflects the cross-reference to make it easier to track the related work. To indicate that work is in progress, you can link an issue to a pull request. Pull requests addressing an issue typically include a [keyword that automatically closes the issue](issues/tracking-your-work-with-issues/linking-a-pull-request-to-an-issue#linking-a-pull-request-to-an-issue-using-a-keyword) when the pull request merges.
+Issues let you track your work on {% data variables.product.company_short %}, where development happens. When you mention an issue in another issue or pull request, the issue's timeline reflects the cross-reference so that you can keep track of related work. To indicate that work is in progress, you can link an issue to a pull request. When the pull request merges, the linked issue automatically closes.
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+For more information on keywords, see "[Linking a pull request to an issue](issues/tracking-your-work-with-issues/linking-a-pull-request-to-an-issue#linking-a-pull-request-to-an-issue-using-a-keyword)."
 
 ## Quickly create issues
 
-Issues can be created in a variety of ways, you can choose the most convenient method for your workflow. For example, you can create an issue from a repository,{% ifversion fpt or ghec %} an item in a task list,{% endif %} a note in a project, a comment in an issue or pull request, a specific line of code, or a URL query. You can  create an issue from your platform of choice:
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-* Through the web UI
-* {% data variables.product.prodname_desktop %}
-* {% data variables.product.prodname_cli %}
-* GraphQL and REST APIs
-* {% data variables.product.prodname_mobile %}
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-For more information, see "[Creating an issue](/issues/tracking-your-work-with-issues/creating-issues/creating-an-issue)."
+Issues can be created in a variety of ways, so you can choose the most convenient method for your workflow. For example, you can create an issue from a repository,{% ifversion fpt or ghec %} an item in a task list,{% endif %} a note in a project, a comment in an issue or pull request, a specific line of code, or a URL query. You can also create an issue from your platform of choice: through the web UI, {% data variables.product.prodname_desktop %}, {% data variables.product.prodname_cli %}, GraphQL and REST APIs, or {% data variables.product.prodname_mobile %}. For more information, see "[Creating an issue](/issues/tracking-your-work-with-issues/creating-issues/creating-an-issue)."
 
 ## Track work