From 87cdab9de2adcfdbfe7bfbf4d77da5c723ab984c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Rachael Rose Renk <91027132+rachaelrenk@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 14 Dec 2022 10:03:14 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] [2022-12-14] User dormancy report for GHEC (#33408)

---
 .../managing-dormant-users.md                 | 21 +++++++------------
 .../dormant-user-activity.md                  |  2 +-
 2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/admin/user-management/managing-users-in-your-enterprise/managing-dormant-users.md b/content/admin/user-management/managing-users-in-your-enterprise/managing-dormant-users.md
index eef5eaf0fe..8f365fbab6 100644
--- a/content/admin/user-management/managing-users-in-your-enterprise/managing-dormant-users.md
+++ b/content/admin/user-management/managing-users-in-your-enterprise/managing-dormant-users.md
@@ -18,15 +18,17 @@ topics:
   - Licensing
 ---
 
-{% ifversion ghec %}
-{% data reusables.enterprise-accounts.dormant-user-release-phase %}
-{% endif %}
-
 ## About dormant users
 
 {% data reusables.enterprise-accounts.dormant-user-activity %}
 
-{% ifversion ghes or ghae%}
+{% ifversion ghec %}
+When assessing user dormancy, we only consider organizations, repositories, or sign-on events that are associated with the enterprise. For example, a user who has recently commented on an issue in a public repository outside of the enterprise may be considered dormant, while a user who has commented on an issue in a public repository within the enterprise will not be considered dormant. 
+
+Only sign-on events through an SSO domain associated with your enterprise are considered user activity associated with the enterprise.
+{% endif %}
+
+{% ifversion ghes or ghae %}
 ## Viewing dormant users
 
 {% data reusables.enterprise-accounts.viewing-dormant-users %}
@@ -66,13 +68,4 @@ topics:
 1. To download your Dormant Users (beta) report as a CSV file, under "Other", click {% octicon "download" aria-label="The Download icon" %} **Download**.
   ![Download button under "Other" on the Compliance page](/assets/images/help/business-accounts/dormant-users-download-button.png)
 
-{% tip %}
-
-**Tip:**
-For the purposes of assessing user dormancy, user activity is scoped to include only user activity associated with organizations, repositories, or sign-on events that are associated with the enterprise. For example, if a user has recently commented on an issue in a public repository not associated with the enterprise, they may be considered dormant. However, if they have recently commented on an issue in a public repository associated with an organization in your enterprise, they will not be considered dormant and will not appear in the Dormant User report.
-
-In the case of web sign-on events, only sign-on events through via an SSO domain associated with your enterprise are considered user activity associated with the enterprise.
-
-{% endtip %}
-
 {% endif %}
diff --git a/data/reusables/enterprise-accounts/dormant-user-activity.md b/data/reusables/enterprise-accounts/dormant-user-activity.md
index 24b839f410..b61eb9ff02 100644
--- a/data/reusables/enterprise-accounts/dormant-user-activity.md
+++ b/data/reusables/enterprise-accounts/dormant-user-activity.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-A user is considered active if the user has performed any of the following activities on {% ifversion fpt or ghec or ghes %}{% data variables.location.product_location %}{% elsif ghae %}{% data variables.product.product_name %}{% endif %}.
+A user is considered active if the user has performed any of the following activities on {% ifversion fpt or ghes %}{% data variables.location.product_location %}{% elsif ghae %}{% data variables.product.product_name %}{% elsif ghec %}your enterprise{% endif %}.
 
 - Signing into {% data variables.location.product_location %}
 - Creating a repository