From eb711ec0eef3a1b0a7b810ebc55f9e1eefd6fc85 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: ic-768 <83115125+ic-768@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 9 May 2022 15:05:53 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] README wording improvements (#301)

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 README.md | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 62c0b1e9..c9a18417 100644
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+++ b/README.md
@@ -3,14 +3,14 @@
 ## What is PyScript
 
 ### Summary
-PyScript is a Pythonic alternative to Scratch, JSFiddle or other "easy to use" programming frameworks, making the web a friendly, hackable, place where anyone can author interesting and interactive applications.
+PyScript is a Pythonic alternative to Scratch, JSFiddle, and other "easy to use" programming frameworks, with the goal of making the web a friendly, hackable place where anyone can author interesting and interactive applications.
 
 To get started see [GETTING-STARTED](GETTING-STARTED.md).
 
 For examples see [the pyscript folder](pyscriptjs).
 
 ### Longer Version
-PyScript is a meta project that aims to combine multiple open technologies to create a framework for users to use Python (and other languages) to create sophisticated applications in the browser. It highly integrates with the way the DOM works in the browser and allows users to add logic, in Python, in a way that feels natural to web as well as Python developers.
+PyScript is a meta project that aims to combine multiple open technologies into a framework that allows users to create sophisticated browser applications with Python. It integrates seamlessly with the way the DOM works in the browser and allows users to add Python logic in a way that feels natural both to web and Python developers.
 
 ## Try PyScript
 
@@ -19,10 +19,10 @@ To try PyScript, import the appropriate pyscript files to your html page with:
 <link rel="stylesheet" href="https://pyscript.net/alpha/pyscript.css" />
 <script defer src="https://pyscript.net/alpha/pyscript.js"></script>
 ```
-At that point, you can then use PyScript components in your html page. PyScript currently implements the following elements:
+You can then use PyScript components in your html page. PyScript currently implements the following elements:
 
-* `<py-script>`: that can be used to define python code that is executable within the web page. The element itself is not rendered to the page and only used to add logic
-* `<py-repl>`: creates a REPL component that is rendered to the page as a code editor and allows users to write code that can be executed
+* `<py-script>`: can be used to define python code that is executable within the web page. The element itself is not rendered to the page and is only used to add logic
+* `<py-repl>`: creates a REPL component that is rendered to the page as a code editor and allows users to write executable code
 
 Check out the [pyscriptjs/examples](pyscriptjs/examples) folder for more examples on how to use it, all you need to do is open them in Chrome.
 
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ To contribute:
 ## Notes
 
 * This is an extremely experimental project, so expect things to break!
-* PyScript has been only tested on Chrome, at the moment.
+* PyScript has been only tested on Chrome at the moment.
 
 ## Governance